Simon Darrel

Name: Simon Darrel
Nickname: Drako
Age: 12
Rank: New Aura Trainer
Battle style: Aggressive
Looks: Simon has black hair and blue eyes. His skin is brown and he often wears a blue jacket, red shirt, torn denom jeans, white joggers, black gloves, green and red baseball cap and a gold ring and his height is 5'9
Personality: Simon is a sly kid. He hates doing work. Instead he does the most dangerous things ever. He doesnt care what other people think he is a ignerant idiot.
History: Simon grew up on a farm since he was 4 and never made friends with anyone. The reason for that was he could not go to school. So he had a very sad life. He didn't go to school because he was too naughty. But he did go to the city to give people tips on stuff they do all the time for money.



Pokemon: Riolu
Nickname: Puncher
Gender: Male
Level: 12
Moves: Quick Attack, Foresight, Endure, Counter, Force Palm, Blaze Kick
Personality: Shy

Problems
1) You'd be a New Aura Trainer not Aura Guardian
2) More Looks or a Picture
3) Longer Personality preferably at least three sentences
4) Longer History preferably at least 6 sentences


Suggestion
Since you want to be a Aura Trainer you can start with a riolu if you want

do i have to do it all again

In the upper right hand corner of the post is a Edit box you can edit the post to fix it instead of doing it all over again

Why not look at some of the Approved Trainers to see what I'm talking about.
Just click the Approved Trainers topic and look at some of the characters there to get a idea of how you should make your character

im bored

lunas coming on to approve it soon

crashcorse wrote:

Looks: black hair blue jacket red shirt torn denom jeans white joggers black gloves green bag brown skin eyes are blue red baseball cap and a gold ring
Personality: Simon is a sly kid. He hates doing work. Instead he does the most dangerous things ever. he doesnt care what other people think he is a ignerant idiot.
History: Simon grew up on a farm since he was 4 and never made friends with anyone. The reason for that was he could not go to school. So he had a very sad life. He didnt go to school because he was too naughty, But he did go to the city to give people tips on stuff they do all the time for money.

Problems
1) You should add his height, eye color, skin color, body type, and things like that to the Looks
*EXAMPLE* (I'm best at girls)
Lily is 5'8 with raven black hair and bright red eyes. She often wears a short-sleeved black dress that comes to her knees and black sandels. She has slightly tanned skin with no freckles

2) You should add some things he likes as well not all dislikes

*EXAMPLE*
Lily is rather shy. She doesn't get along with people very often but loves pokemon. She likes to sing when no other people are around and sticks mostly to herself

3) History should be detailed
*EXAMPLE*
Lily grew up in the city. She never got along with other kids because they mad fun of her eyes. She grew up without any friends other than some wild pokemon. She spents most of her time alone and away from everyone else

4) Please use correct spelling, and capitalisation,

it does have the eye colour and skin colour his skin is brown his eyes are blue

Well what's his height?

where do i put his height

if i do his height am i finished

in Looks and other than that I don't see anything else wrong

thanx

Approved