Neko Chirashi

Name: Neko Chirashi
Nickname: flying cat
Age: 17
Gender:Male
Rank: Aura Trainer, experienced trainer
Birthplace: Kanto cerulean town
Battle Style: quick fire or other attacks that have high power low accuracy
Looks:
Personality: he is brave and proud.He is a neat freak that enjoys bacon. Neko is a character with a upbeat addatude. He is cool and popular. Neko likes cats and he is trying to fly with makeshift wings.
History: Neko was 7 when he moved to kanto. He had Never known about these Creatures called Pokemon.In interest he asked his mom for one. Neko was greeted at Christmas with a small pidgey that there family kept in a cage named pidg . He Was crestfallen by it's small petite power and looks next year.

when he was 11 he got a charmander over in pallet town from professor oak to start his journey.he named it flamie of his flaming tail. a year later his mother gave him pigey.he trained pidg to a pigeoto. that mached with flamie who was a charmeon at the time. Neko caught a sneazel he traded snezel for a glaceon not found in Kanto . in the forest he caught a ratacate. in the fights he evolved Flamie to a charazarid

Badges: bolder bade, cascade Bade,thunder badge

Items: 5 Pokeballs 1 ultraball
Money: $15,000 (Do not change)

Pokémon

Pokémon: Charizard
Nickname: Flamie
Gender:male
Level:37
Moves: flame thrower tm
Fire Fang Fire
32 Flame Burst Fire
36 Wing Attack Flying


Ability: blaze

Personality: (doesn't need to be very descriptive a basic like Friendly or Shy will work): bold
Exp: 0

Pokemon:Pidgeoto

nickname: Pidg

gender:male

level:27

moves

Spoiler:

ability:keen eye

personality: outgoing pushy attitude


Pokemon: gleaceon

gender:female

Level:17

moves

Spoiler:

keeps to herself

ratacate

male

level: 20

move

Spoiler:

mean

I'm not a moderator, and I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post here (If not tell me and I'll delete my post), but I know that you can't have that high a level for a Charizard. Markj1998 has the most trainers, and he makes the most posts, so he is pretty much the best Role Player on the forums, and he is only allowed Pokemon roughly level -50.

Right I haven't yet passed lesson 4/5 my trainer application training but she's right so here are the things that need changing:

1) Your not allowed to have a pokemon that high a level when its only your third trainer.
2) You can't start with badges you have to earn them via role-playing.
3) Your only allowed to start with 5 Pokeball's which means bye bye Ultra ball.
4) Mahogany Town is in Johto not Kanto.
5) Your allowed more than 4 moves for your pokemon.
6) Minor thing but it's Glaceon not Gleaceon.
7) You need to Extend your Personality by a few more lines.
8) If you said you have a Raticate on your history where is he/she on your pokemon list.

These are the things I have noticed from my own personal experiences on your Trainer's application. Fix these and perhaps a full mod may approve the application but first things first these things must be edited and fixed.

check my other ones kirby fan said i could have badges items and alot of moves plus i ujusted the lelvl

Mark said you can have more than 4 moves.
Because you don't have many characters, and you're not a veteran or staff member, lower your badge count so you at least have the first two or 3 and lower the levels.

fixed

Now the Pokemon seem to high xD Either lower the levels or have the Thunder Badge

fixed

Charizard can't learn Flamethrower until level 47, so change it so it says TM. And it can't learn slash until level 41.

Steel Wing is a EM not a TM

Glaceon can't learn Ice Shard until level 36 and it doesn't learn quick attack until level 22.

Rattata doesn't evolve into Raticate until level 20.

done

You never edited Steel wing to be an EM
You never removed Ice Shard either.....

Gnaw is not a move... Raticate can't learn Growl.

is sorry and is done?

Give Glaceon a Personality, and if you could just clean up the trainer a bit, not everything is capitalized and it's difficult to understand.

finaled?

Also, how was he born in Kant, if Mahogany Town is in Johto?

oppsey sorry *click type*

OKay...Approved.