phatboy13111
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 |  Subject: samuel fenton  Sun Jul 31, 2011 7:40 am | |
| Name: Samuel Fenton Nickname: phatboy1311 Age: 15 Rank: Rookie Trainer Battle Style: fight first, if im gonna lose change pokemon Looks:  Personality: funny bet serious is a nice and cool person as long as u dont piss me off with uneccassary actions. other than that i am a friendly guy who doesnt really disrespect anyon and love to make people laugh History: i always loved pokemon but never decided to be a trainer until i realized how some people treat their pokemon, at age of 15 he decided to show everyone how to treat thier pokemon by becoming the champion. i will battle and defeat anyone who is in my way, pisses me off, or mistreats pokemon. Badges:Items: 5 Poke Balls Money: $15,000 PokémonPokémon: Pikachu Nickname:Gender: Male Level: 7 Moves: Growl, Thundershock, Tail Whip Ability: Static Personality: Bold Exp: 0
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Quibbloboy12
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| | Subject: Re: samuel fenton Sun Jul 31, 2011 5:05 pm | |
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Quibbloboy12
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| | Subject: Re: samuel fenton Sun Jul 31, 2011 6:36 pm | |
| Okay, since I have nothing better to do, I've cleaned it up for you. :)
Anyways, the problems:
Personality and History should both be a bit longer
At level 7, Pikachu would know Growl, Thundershock and Tail Whip.
Also, by nickname we mean what your character calls himself. |
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Quibbloboy12
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| | Subject: Re: samuel fenton Sun Jul 31, 2011 6:58 pm | |
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